Tracked Edits and Comments in LinkedIn Article: "The Ability of Conscious Choice"

In-line, tracked edits of the full first draft of a LinkedIn article entitled “The Ability of Conscious Choice.” Example is representative of a mid-range, intermediate-level edit and proofing of work that includes corrections to basic grammar and word usage or phrasing issues, plus minor stylistic suggestions to promote a clear, consistent message.

September 6, 2016
Online Article (LinkedIn)
Editor, Copywriter, Copy Editor, Proofreader